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[Shinku no Yami]

*The man continues to plead, holding the stolen food up for him to take.* "Wh-what are you talking about? Take it, please! I don't want to be thrown in prison for theft. I'll let myself starve!"

[Uzumaki Naruto]

keep it * he says as he walks around walks around surveying the area his clones around the area dissappear restoring that natural balance of chakra to the area that is blacked out to everything around...*

[Shinku no Yami]

*The man pauses and looks up in both shock and wonder at the man.* "You... even though I stole this, you're gonna let me...?" *The man jumps up to his feet with agility that seems far beyond his age, embracing Naruto in a bone crushing hug - the old man's bones anyway.* "Bless you, boy! You're one of the kindest souls I've ever met!" *The man almost seems close to tears at this gesture.*

[Uzumaki Naruto]

Narutos clone disappears into smoke as he cluches on to naruto and another form of naruto reappears about five feet behind the old man still keeping an eye on the old man but not facing him. *... For that brief instant you...* he smirk*

[Shinku no Yami]

*In that instant, the man, who is now grabbing air, begins to wave his arms frantically before falling face-first into the dirt with a thud. Groaning, he picks himself up and dusts off his clothes, warily coming to a full stand before turning to face the man.* "Not the touchy type I suppose. Still, thank you all the same. I'll never forget your kindness, Mr. ...?" *He trails off, unsure what to call this man and silently asking for him to fill in the blanks.*

[Uzumaki Naruto]

It would proble be less confusing for you if you don't know my name ..let's say " friend" ... * naruto... Thinks for a moment... ~who else might this man be after... What could he possible gain from these poisons... The kazekage?~ ... he would be the key target * he says thinking to him self out loud*

[Shinku no Yami]

*The man blinks slightly.* "That's just even more confusing for my old head. Who would be a key target? Of what? You're starting to scare me young man!" *The old man's eyes shift ever so slightly, as if he were still looking at Naruto, but rather right over his shoulder. His eyes widen in fear, and he lets out a gasp of terror.*

*Behind Naruto, a very large cloaked figure floats eerily in the air. Its cloak blows steadily in the wind, where its legs should have been, and its grotesquely long arms are outstretched towards the two.*

"What is that!?"



*Involuntarily, a feeling of dread, fear, and sadness envelopes the area, as the opposite is sucked away. The creature darts forward, a vacuum forming from its mouth, draining the chakra from both of its victims as it approaches. The old man falls back under its attack, while it continues, using inhuman speed and strength to grab Naruto and hold him, for it to continue stealing his chakra, unaffected by the Natural Energy, as the creature is unnatural to begin with.*

[Uzumaki Naruto]

Naruto sences the presences of the inhuman "thing" the moment it shows up and his involentary movements of the sennin mode take place and glances back at the "thing" with a grin but these movements would be invisible to both the old man on the ground and the "thing" and seemingly in the exact moment it appears he disappears along with the old man and naruto comes down on the creature as he does to pein when he goes after tsunade but this time a sphere appears in his hand the sphere is round with a white center to the ball surrounded by blackness around it Sage art: dark natural release rasengan as it would impact the creature the ball would turn to void sucking the chakra and life force out of the creature rapidly ( I'm gonna eventually have todo what you did with seki cause their is so much that the sage arts I have created. )

[Shinku no Yami]

((Funnily enough, a lot of my character's abilities are Sage abilities. I gave them to him before Sage Mode existed, and then Kishi invented Sage mode lol. Like sensing presences nearby, using chakra outside of the body, etc lol.)

*As the creature is struck with the sphere, it would seem to let out a howl of pain, before disappearing completely, as if blown to pieces by the attack, its robes in shreds from the attack.*

[Uzumaki Naruto]

( well sage mode and stuff is more then sensing presences and stuff but ya I get that lol I started playing naruto a character when he was still weaker then sasuke( underdog and all) expanded from their now I can expand on everything lol btw what do u use to translate your technique into names that make sence lol)

Naruto.. * clone disappears to have his consciousness reenter his original location above the village in the center * that wasn't it... * naruto sighs* that must of been a distraction..

[Shinku no Yami]

(Well yeah, but those were the two biggest ones lol. Other things I included were being able to hit opponents without hitting them, and I forget the rest. Also I use a few sources to translate stuff. I use a site where I look up an English word to find its Romaji/Kanji, and then I use another site to check out the Kanji for other possible English meanings and Romaji spellings, which is why "光", which is the Kanji symbol for "Light", can be said as both "Kō" and "Hikari", which mean the same thing. Also, "Yō", as in "Yōton", means both "Yang Release" and "Lava Release" lol.)

*The village falls into silence once again as Naruto disappears, moving focus back to the real Naruto in the center of the village. Focus gradually shifts back to where his clone was, along with the old man, who still lays still on the dirt ground. The ground around him begins to shift slightly, raising up around him in a circular pattern, ever so slowly. The circle begins to form what looks like teeth, forming a grotesque mouth out of the ground around the old man, which turns from a dirt substance, into the black substance of the creature that Naruto had just attacked. With a quick and sickening *SNAP*, the jaws clench tightly, swallowing the old man whole in the enormous mouth, with a scream. The mouth sinks into the ground, leaving no trace of the man or itself, reverting back to the dirt it once was.*

(The mouth has this creepy shape)

[Uzumaki Naruto]

how currious... * naruto opens his eyes to the sight of the creature from the earth dissappearing...* the shift in the chakra pressure reminded me of...no it couldn't be.... * another set of naruto's clones appear throughout the village while he remains motionless for the entire time

[Shinku no Yami]

*A high-pitched static fills the air, causing hairs to stand up involuntarily. From seemingly all around, faint whispers from multiple voices can be heard, though what they are saying is too muffled to understand. The pitch of the sound becomes higher and higher, as if building up to something, until finally...*

*POOF*

*A loud rumble is heard from an enormous summoning. There, hovering over the village, is a COLOSSAL creature like the one from before, only thousands of times larger. It's hood expands and contracts with its breathing, letting out an icy chilled mist with each exhale. The creature appears to eye Naruto with its eyeless face, before rearing its arm back, holding it above the village. With a single thrust, the creatures palm, which easily covers the entire village and then some, comes crashing down on top of everything. Just before it makes contact, however, a faint voice is heard from seemingly nowhere.*

"-sama..."

"-sama!"

"Naruto-sama!"

*In that instant, everything around vanishes, revealing Naruto to be standing back with the old man, who appears equally in a daze. A hand is on each of their shoulders, connected to Zihark, who had just arrived.*

"Are you alright? You were both just standing here motionlessly, and I knew. Someone must have set a Genjutsu trap, most likely a field trap. I prepared myself to kai out of it as I walked over to you. Who is this man here?" *He asks while looking over at the man.*

Tomake: "I'm Tomake. You have my thanks. I thought I'd been killed..."

[Uzumaki Naruto]

mhm..he's good i didn't even... * naruto looks at zuhark not looking very much surprised * well now he's gone

[Shinku no Yami]

Zihark: "Yes..." *He moves his hands off the two,*

Tomake: "Indeed. No matter how good you are at breaking Genjutsu, it's useless if you don't know you're in one, cause then you won't even try." *He then pauses, looking somewhat ashamed.* "So, am I off the hook for stealing that bread? Perhaps an old man could be treated to some dinner?" *The old man flashes a hopeful toothless grin, well almost toothless.*

Zihark: *He walks over and claps the man on the back.* "Come on, old-timer. Let's go get some ramen, or barbeque if your stomach can handle it."

Tomake: "Are you kidding? This stomach of mine could handle my wife's cooking back in the day. It's immortal!" *He laughs, earning a chuckle from Zihark as well, as they begin to walk off.*

Zihark: *As they walk away, he flashes his face back slightly.* "Thank you, Naruto. He may have escaped, but you managed to get this intruder to leave. Only the real Naruto could continue to strengthen the bond between the Sand and the Leaf that easily. I believe you."

~Off in the desert, a couple hundred miles away~

"Step one, complete."

[Uzumaki Naruto]

* naruto smiles * the least I could do for my absence * in the back of his head as the two walk off he trails off~ this is far from over....perhaps I should meet with the kazekage and let him know of my findings...~ that shouldn't be nessicary * naruto makes a hand signs and a a small bird appears on his shoulder and he sits for a brief moment writing up the report of what has happened and he attaches it to the bird and it flys towards the kazekages chakra signature in the village and naruto goes towards the village gates slowly as ifsomething is on his mind *